Friday, February 18, 2011

I wish

The stars shine down
Showing me the path
Where the grass is green
And the wind blows clean

With no anxiety, with no fear,
I wish you were also here.
I walk by taking ur hand
Away from the shadow, farther from the land..
Deep into the misty sea, and far into the azure sky
Where the rules of the nature only apply

The rejuvenating silence flows with the river,
Reflecting my thoughts like a mirror
The crass and the cacophony are no longer there
I wish you were also here!

Well, quite a wishful thinking.. one of my friends suggested me to rename the title of the poem to "Finding NeverLand"
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8 comments:

  1. Day DreamerFebruary 18, 2011 at 2:35 AM

    Nice... Someday you will sing this while playing your guitar along :)

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  2. Vibhu KapoorFebruary 18, 2011 at 3:03 AM

    Very original and pure. Good work sappy

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  3. ImwatImFebruary 18, 2011 at 3:06 AM

    Awesome dude .. straight from the heart .. keep it up !!

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  4. ShreyasFebruary 18, 2011 at 3:39 AM

    Goodie Good Sappy :-)

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  5. Shiwani KapoorFebruary 18, 2011 at 9:52 PM

    This one is really nice!! You composed it yourself?? Amazing!! :)

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  6. Candid TalkFebruary 19, 2011 at 11:27 AM

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  7. Candid TalkFebruary 19, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    Amazing bhai! Direct dil se ! :) GREAT WORK ... You will surely explore the horizons unexplored bhai !

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  8. The Free BirdFebruary 22, 2011 at 4:30 AM

    lovely...!! :)

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